Sang ide!

[Haarfagr]

Heisann!

Fikk ikke sove her om dagen.. også fikk jeg plutselig en ide om sangtekst osv.. også blei det plustelig endel.. Så vil gjærne at dere ser over det, også sier hva dere mener om det, hva er bra/dårlig osv:) og husk: dette er bare en IDE xD ikke skrivd så det skal passe til noen melodi, altså bare et utgangspunkt ;D

her it is:

shadows in the snow, dark and immortal. The moon was reflecting in the black water. The dawn was near, the night were soon coming to and end.. I laugh! Snow crystals upon the body, laying at the side of the lake. Dead and cold. you left us! my thoughts were somewhere else. i murdered in rage and sickness.. my emotions took control. everything was like a mess. I had to go home.. sacrifise was over. the ignorant got what it deserved, pain and coldness. the trees wept in sadness. next day i mourn. for hours and days. A beautiful mourning. to cover up what i had just became. I felt purified, all new and clean, but still so old. Haunting the weak, the ones who ddidnt cheric(s?)e life. the ones who turn away their face and fell into the dark black hole called ignorance. some call it meaningless sill of blood.. i call it justice. No future, no life, no soul.... When can they see what i see? when can they feel what i feel? When do they realise their mistakes? its now or never..

ehehehhehe

[Captain Koala]

Hei! Flott at du er kreativ, dette kan sikkert brukes til en sang. Du kan jo prøve å sette det inn i et system med strofer (vers). Litt lettere å bruke det senere da kanskje.

[Hatecrew]

Grei tekst! Kan deffinitivt bli brukt i en sang

Men eg personlig ville ikkje tatt me så mye "Blood, dead, immortal, dark" og sånne ting.. For en eller annen grunn så misliker eg det

Prøver på ingen måte å vere uhøflig!